Then we drove Susie up to Mulholland Drive to see the views and take pictures, it really was a nice, warm day to do this. Then we went to the Grove and window shopped and had another celebrity sighting (Kelly Osbourne - we also heard Gwen Stefani and her crew were there but we didn't actually see them). Also, we spent some time at the bookstore where I got some new paperbacks and Harry Connick Jr's new Christmas CD. I had a gift certificate from my birthday so it was fun to get to spend that! Also, I didn't even know HCJ had a new Christmas CD out - another exciting part of my day!
We had a good Mexican dinner at Chipolte (I LOVE LOVE LOVE their chips) and then I headed off to class. I got there super early so I had time to visit the script library and pick up some more reading material and spent some quiet time reading a new "textbook" about life as a Hollywood Assistant. And then there was my table read...
Again, I can't tell you how excited I was for this - I had 20 pages I'd written, rewritten, edited and edited some more. I worked really hard on this - going back and rewriting the first 15 pages, adding characters, killing off characters, making sure my writing served the character's and my purposes. And I was still excited tonight, until they started reading...
And I got really nervous. Like my face felt like it was on fire, my head started pounding, I couldn't help but obsess over what my teacher kept scribbling furiously on his pages. It wasn't good. But then again, it happened, I started listening. I started marking where they laughed with smiley faces. And I relaxed and enjoyed the "show". And everyone's really getting into the table reads now - they're starting to know the characters and the plot and they're having fun, "getting into character" so to speak. I know I am when I get to read. And it went well, so well.
Here are a few of the responses (and yes, I know I'm tooting my own horn but I'm excited and want to share my excitement!):
- It's taking shape!
- Your characters are bonding and it's working well - there are changes in relationships, exactly how it should be.
- I loved the sense of detail, how you create a real world here.
- And the marriage relationship and it's troubles, great.
- And the rest, it's just, it's really kinda lovely.
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And the rest, it's just, it's really kinda lovely.
My favorite! Reminds me of you!! I love you, Rockstar-
so glad your read went well....sorry i'm late in commenting!
i am so proud of you! :) as i tell my students....
"keep walkin that walk and talkin' that talk!"
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